Friday 6 April 2012

The Nest

Life is a wonderful, exciting fest
Where our worth is always put to test
Once the fest comes to an end
We replenish ourselves in our nest

Some rides in the fest are so tough
When situation seem to be rough
That's when we are tested the most
Brooding at times , I have had enough!

These are times when we wish to reach the end
But then we get a hope , a solace , a friend
Who helps you out of the maze
His help, his comforts always ready to lend

Yet in the same maze, he might get caught
When your helps is silently sought
To play your part , tear his problems apart
That's when precious memories are wrought

There are also times we need our solitude
To seek our minds's blissful beatitude
When we withdraw into ourselves
Though with a sense of utter gratitude

We will fall down, we will fly high 
Sometimes with a smile , sometimes with a cry
Yet always finding the much needed peace
Resting our self in the nest built in the sky 

image: ParkeHarrison


Prompted by image at Magpie Tales and FormForAll: Rubaiyat Quatrains at  dVerse Poets Pub hosted by Samuel Peralta.

An attempt at writing at Rubaiyat Quatrain which is characterized with  the rhyme scheme AABA .

8 comments:

  1. You deftly wove together inspiration from the picture as well as the rubaiyat form - no mean feat, I'm sure!

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    1. i agree there are def times we need our solitude....and refreshing in the nest...you did really well with the form...nicely done...

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    2. Thank you Brian :) Happy Easter!
      Had to come with this in just 20 mins as Mister Linky Widget was about to expire.

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  2. I like the idea of a nest as a haven of rest and solitude. Thanks for sharing.

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  3. Nice choice of words. Enjoyed your poetry.

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  4. Interesting use of the image sand an important topic

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  5. already commented before so will just say it is always great to see you at dverse...

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