Monday, 21 September 2020

Dear Sky

 

Dear Sky,
 
    Mystically majestically
        You blanket the whole world
    Clearly cryptically  
        You hold all the stars in place
    Stunningly cunningly
        You act as a veil for puny gods
    Blissfully beautifully
        You are the universe’s saree
    Coincidental and accidental
        You are the canvas of creation.
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13 comments:

  1. De JacksonMonday, 21 September 2020 at 14:21:00 GMT-7

    The sky as "canvas of creation" is just perfection.

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  2. Arcadia MariaMonday, 21 September 2020 at 14:40:00 GMT-7

    Lovely quadrille.

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  3. indybevMonday, 21 September 2020 at 15:50:00 GMT-7

    "The canvas of creation" ... what a beautiful thought. Very creative write.

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  4. Victoria StuartMonday, 21 September 2020 at 17:06:00 GMT-7

    Oh, a love letter to the sky, how absolutely marvelous. I love the form, the language, your engaging wordplay and internal rhyming. This is lovely!

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  5. LucyMonday, 21 September 2020 at 20:45:00 GMT-7

    Very beautiful and immersing!

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  6. brudbergTuesday, 22 September 2020 at 11:56:00 GMT-7

    I love to see the sky as a canvas... and really the sky is the void where we pin our existence.

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  7. Old EggTuesday, 22 September 2020 at 16:44:00 GMT-7

    I love looking at the sky unless she cries of course!

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  8. GraceTuesday, 22 September 2020 at 16:59:00 GMT-7

    A majestic ode and letter to the sky. I specially admire this part:

    Stunningly cunningly
    You act as a veil for puny gods

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