I see with glee
The great sea roar
Like me – aimless.
Written for FormForAll - Than Bauk at dVersePoets hosted by Raivenne.
"The Than-Bauk is a three line “climbing rhyme” poem of Burmese origin. Conventionally a witty saying or epigram, it’s even shorter than a haiku, but a lot more structured. Each Than-Bauk is three lines of four syllables each with the rhyme on the fourth, third and second syllables of each line respectively.
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O. O. a. O.
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O. O. a. O.
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