Friday, 9 November 2012

Aimless Waves




I see with glee
The great sea roar
Like me – aimless.



Written for FormForAll - Than Bauk at dVersePoets hosted by Raivenne.



"The Than-Bauk is a three line “climbing rhyme” poem of Burmese origin. Conventionally a witty saying or epigram, it’s even shorter than a haiku, but a lot more structured. Each Than-Bauk is three lines of four syllables each with the rhyme on the fourth, third and second syllables of each line respectively.
O. O. O. a.
O. O. 
a. O.
    O. 
a. O. O. "


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