I see her every morning
In the crowded city bus
Always sits at the window seat
Holding her black shining purse
Rarely she misses her daily stop,
Only on days when she falls asleep
On many days she is found,
Reflecting on thoughts too deep
She always keeps the window open
For the breeze to caress her pretty face
And for the rhythm of the breeze
To make her hair flutter like a silken lace
Never have I spoken to her
Hence I know not her name
But to be lost in her rapturing smile
Every single moment I am game
Some mornings she is found
Blushing at her mobile's latest text
On some others she is lost
With her Rubik's cube she is vexed
Last week she had her friends for company
To find her name, I eavesdropped
But all I could hear was her nickname - D.B.
For she vanished, as the bus stopped.
With her Rubik's cube she is vexed
Last week she had her friends for company
To find her name, I eavesdropped
But all I could hear was her nickname - D.B.
For she vanished, as the bus stopped.
hey...next time she falls asleep, you should wake her when her stop comes and take the opportunity to introduce yourself to her...smiles..
ReplyDeleteAh now that's a wonderful idea :) Thanks Claudia!
Deletesmiles....cool capture man one you admire from afar and you capture some cool details that make it all real...ha if you do as cladia says i expect a follow up poem....i wanna know...smiles.
ReplyDeleteThank you Brian :)
DeleteI will let you know if I write a follow up poem!
You must ask her name...
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
I will surely do that the next time I see her :-)
DeleteThanks Anna!
Only "DB" -- how sad. That was funny. Muster up your courage, mate -- go say hello! :-)
ReplyDeleteBTW, your link to the Prose Poem of Anna is broken -- like you erased your poem. Just thought you'd want to know.
Only "DB" -- how sad. That was funny. Muster up your courage, mate -- go say hello! :-)
ReplyDeleteBTW, your link to the Prose Poem of Anna is broken -- like you erased your poem. Just thought you'd want to know.
Thanks a lot Sabio! I had accidentally erased my attempt at prose poem, have reposted it now :)
DeleteWhat a great succession of moments, each telling equally of observer and object. The distance and mystery definitely add to the appeal of a prize in some cases.
ReplyDelete"She always keeps the window open"
Details like this are so excellent.
You've made me care! You must speak to her! And then let us know how it goes.
ReplyDeletelove from afar... sometimes the fantasy is more precious than what reality might be....and sometimes not. Beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteThe observer clearly watches closely, memorizing details then shared in this poem. It is those details that connect us to the characters. It is those details that make us want to know more.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this very much. Thanks for sharing with Poetry Pantry.
ReplyDeleteThis was beautiful and interesting!! Keep it up!! Love it :)
ReplyDeleteGirls & girls
ReplyDeletei always wonder this
A' him' is always incomplete without a 'her'
What thy God plan to inspire or conspire us..?