Friday 1 June 2012

In Case I Do Not Return

Just in case
I do not return
From the long and winding road
I wish
No one has any concern
For I have been here
too long
Maybe
I was mashed by travel's load
Just in case
I do not return

I might not have been
too strong
And became prey
to a hungry toad
I wish
No one has any concern
If I got caged
in a celestial song
For a large debt
I long owed
Just in case
I do not return

I may have just flew along
With the strong breeze that blowed
I wish
No one has any concern
If I wandered
to where I belong
When my soul's vehicle is towed
Just in case
I do not return
I wish
No one has any concern


Prompted by On Free Verse, Picasso, and Yachting at dVerse Poets Pub hosted by Samuel Peralta (which asks us to hide a structured poem in free verse. I chose to experiment with my first villanelle)
and also Carry On Tuesday #157 - The long and winding road ( the title and first line of one of The Beatles most memorable song)

7 comments:

  1. The shorter lines are unusual for villanelles, but the repetitive refrain structure works just as well. An interesting experiment, definitely, and well-worth exploring in other poems.

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  2. nice...you embedd the repetition well in this....this was really cool man...

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  3. glad you slipped this back in for open link night...enjoying visiting

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  4. Sounds almost like a song when read aloud. Nice work!

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