F E A R S
bordering us
from
having
FAITH
T I M E
bordering us
from
staying
in TOUCH
H U R T
bordering us
from
being
HAPPY
M E M O R I E S
bordering us
from
enjoying
the MOMENT
P R E J U D I C E S
bordering us
from
understanding
PEOPLE
D O U B T S
bordering us
from
pursuing
our DREAMS
B O U L D E R S
bordering us
from
being what we are
so true...and it's good to identify the borders and find ways to get them out of the way...nice...also liked that you wrote the border names in CAPs..underlines it..
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ReplyDeletebordering ummi from
keeping his tummy
FLAT!
WOW! how profound! This is so very true and very well written! ...a huge like from me!!
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Thank you so much! :)
Deletelove this one,
ReplyDeletefun and witty word play.
Thank you Taylor!
Deletea cute poem,
ReplyDeletemasterfully conveyed sentiments.
how did i miss this before...what if we had a world without those borders...what would we accomplish....
ReplyDeleteI had put up the link late that day.. If the world had no borders, maybe we wouldn't be living with our inhibitions.
DeleteThis is nice Umesh.
ReplyDeleteThank you , Janu!
DeleteWe need the borders...then we need to cross them...Nice write!
ReplyDeletetalented piece, smiles.
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DeleteI will join in if I can come up with a poem for the theme.
Wonderful Umesh, we create all that keeps us stuck don't we? Captured "borders" so wonderfully in this. All my best my friend! ~ Rose
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Rose! :)
DeleteOh my goodness, I love this poem! XLNT!
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