Thursday 25 August 2011

The Beginning



Entering into the Library of Life
He goes towards the Fiction section
Searching his book of Genesis

After looking for hours
Finally he gets his favorite novel
Written in his own thoughts and dreams


He begins reading from the middle
Painting those words on the canvas of his mind
Reading the story of "The Beginning"

A lush, beautiful garden
With trees of time filled fruits of fun
Birds and animals living in harmony

There are waterfalls filling him with wonder
Rainbows in the background of nature's rhapsody
Finally he spots the only two humans in this eden.

He knows who they are..
Adam, His mind - the thoughtful and the wise
Eve, His heart - the beautiful and nice

Looking at them causes him to think
They would live happily ever after
Not realizing the twist of fate..

He flips to the beginning of the book
Reading how all this was created by the One
The One, he calls the Soul.



23 comments:

  1. Great write my friend, very beautiful & vivid

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  2. a job well done.

    you may relink to week 2 to see if more folks read you.

    cheers.

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  3. Very nice! It was a difficult prompt for me, but you have made it look so easy. :)

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  4. neat.


    Funny Bunny Fridays week 2 is open for humor entries right now,

    Welcome in,

    It is never too late to share a laughter with your peer bloggers.

    Keep smiling.
    Bless your Tuesday.
    xoxox

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  5. it does make for a nice story...i like the though of them being the mind and heart...

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  6. Beautiful piece... a slight twist, yet wisely shared.

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  7. Yes...the two originals within us all! Loved the intro, the trip to the fiction section, could smell the scent of books as I read through the piece...Loved it.

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  8. An interesting examination of our origins and components.

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  9. Umesh wonderful piece this week, the creation by the soul...just lovely! ~ Rose

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  10. I especially like that you put it in the fiction section.

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  11. A reminder as to what happened and what could have otherwise! Excellent write!

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  12. I love this. Well written, and a wonderful telling of the story!

    My entry this week: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/07/cannonball-3/

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  13. Such a great story teller love this so much
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/08/the-crimson-witch/

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  14. a fantastic story retold,
    glad to see your edition in category of fiction.

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  15. nice beginning.. good write! my entry.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/01/30/lines/

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  16. a religious theme well taken up-reading of The Book is important

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  17. I enjoyed the poem.
    I found the way you addressed the subject
    matter very interesting and well done.

    Good work.

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  18. Very vivid and interesting story telling.

    Beautiful piece.


    ~Len.

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  19. Excellent formation of thought to word to screen.

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  20. A wonderful take on the prompt. It is all creation of ONE, call him by any name.

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