Thursday, 25 August 2011

The Beginning



Entering into the Library of Life
He goes towards the Fiction section
Searching his book of Genesis

After looking for hours
Finally he gets his favorite novel
Written in his own thoughts and dreams


He begins reading from the middle
Painting those words on the canvas of his mind
Reading the story of "The Beginning"

A lush, beautiful garden
With trees of time filled fruits of fun
Birds and animals living in harmony

There are waterfalls filling him with wonder
Rainbows in the background of nature's rhapsody
Finally he spots the only two humans in this eden.

He knows who they are..
Adam, His mind - the thoughtful and the wise
Eve, His heart - the beautiful and nice

Looking at them causes him to think
They would live happily ever after
Not realizing the twist of fate..

He flips to the beginning of the book
Reading how all this was created by the One
The One, he calls the Soul.



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23 comments:

  1. AnonymousThursday, 25 August 2011 at 18:31:00 GMT-7

    you made it, awesome job.

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  2. Real Life PoetSunday, 28 August 2011 at 08:05:00 GMT-7

    Great write my friend, very beautiful & vivid

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  3. Jingle Poetry At Olive GardenWednesday, 31 August 2011 at 08:29:00 GMT-7

    a job well done.

    you may relink to week 2 to see if more folks read you.

    cheers.

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  4. KirtimaliniWednesday, 31 August 2011 at 23:58:00 GMT-7

    Very nice! It was a difficult prompt for me, but you have made it look so easy. :)

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  5. AnonymousTuesday, 6 September 2011 at 09:32:00 GMT-7

    neat.


    Funny Bunny Fridays week 2 is open for humor entries right now,

    Welcome in,

    It is never too late to share a laughter with your peer bloggers.

    Keep smiling.
    Bless your Tuesday.
    xoxox

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  6. Brian MillerTuesday, 6 September 2011 at 20:50:00 GMT-7

    it does make for a nice story...i like the though of them being the mind and heart...

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  7. ReflectionsTuesday, 6 September 2011 at 21:29:00 GMT-7

    Beautiful piece... a slight twist, yet wisely shared.

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  8. TashtooWednesday, 7 September 2011 at 08:10:00 GMT-7

    Yes...the two originals within us all! Loved the intro, the trip to the fiction section, could smell the scent of books as I read through the piece...Loved it.

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  9. hedgewitchWednesday, 7 September 2011 at 08:25:00 GMT-7

    An interesting examination of our origins and components.

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  10. UnknownWednesday, 7 September 2011 at 08:50:00 GMT-7

    Umesh wonderful piece this week, the creation by the soul...just lovely! ~ Rose

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  11. Randy BehaviorWednesday, 7 September 2011 at 17:06:00 GMT-7

    I especially like that you put it in the fiction section.

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  12. kaykualaWednesday, 7 September 2011 at 19:58:00 GMT-7

    A reminder as to what happened and what could have otherwise! Excellent write!

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  13. AnonymousThursday, 8 September 2011 at 07:53:00 GMT-7

    I love this. Well written, and a wonderful telling of the story!

    My entry this week: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/07/cannonball-3/

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  14. Ann LeFloreThursday, 8 September 2011 at 08:49:00 GMT-7

    Such a great story teller love this so much
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/08/the-crimson-witch/

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  15. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryThursday, 8 September 2011 at 09:41:00 GMT-7

    a fantastic story retold,
    glad to see your edition in category of fiction.

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  16. AnonymousThursday, 8 September 2011 at 10:11:00 GMT-7

    nice beginning.. good write! my entry.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/01/30/lines/

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  17. Anjum Wasim DarTuesday, 13 September 2011 at 03:12:00 GMT-7

    a religious theme well taken up-reading of The Book is important

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  18. The Nefarious XTuesday, 13 September 2011 at 03:53:00 GMT-7

    I enjoyed the poem.
    I found the way you addressed the subject
    matter very interesting and well done.

    Good work.

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  19. AnonymousSaturday, 17 September 2011 at 22:21:00 GMT-7

    Very vivid and interesting story telling.

    Beautiful piece.


    ~Len.

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  20. K. Shawn EdgarSunday, 16 October 2011 at 23:47:00 GMT-7

    Excellent formation of thought to word to screen.

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  21. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryTuesday, 17 January 2012 at 20:09:00 GMT-8

    awesome story.

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  22. Harshad MehtaThursday, 19 January 2012 at 02:33:00 GMT-8

    A wonderful take on the prompt. It is all creation of ONE, call him by any name.

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  23. ChèvrefeuilleFriday, 10 August 2012 at 19:08:00 GMT-7

    Awesome!! Need I say more ...

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