Wandering wandering like a lonely cloud,
Shouting shouting in the streets aloud
Who am I ? Why am I here?
Lost in the jungles of time,
Without shelter nor a dime
Who am I ? Why am I here?
Tossing myself between work and play,
Losing myself every night and day
Who am I ? Why am I here?
I am a normal human being
Looking out for well - being ;
A result of million years of evolution,
I am here to bring about a revolution.
This was my first poem.
Wrote it in my 12th Grade , thanks to my English lecturer Sindhu John for making me write it :)
you capture the sense of being one amongst many and not really feeling strong enough to make a difference well - and that's why i like the ending so much....we all can bring some revolution to our world..
ReplyDeletenice...we can easily get lost in the crowd and feel at a loss for purpose...raise that revolution...it only takes one...
ReplyDeletethe last stanza is powerful poetry I loved it! Great flow and great write ~ Rose
ReplyDeleteGreat job! Wonderful flow.
ReplyDeleteI am happy to return to this piece and I again just love that last stanza. Good to read this piece once more ~ Rose
ReplyDelete'Who am I' indeed...very good write. Loved the flow..
ReplyDeleteI like those repetitions. You weren't starting off weakly, were you?
ReplyDeletei was going to say i think i read this once...nice...so in retrospect...did you start that revolution?
ReplyDeleteThanks Brian :)
ReplyDeleteWell not exactly, need to make some radical changes in my life, that would be the beginning of the it.
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