Friday, 16 January 2015

tenWord Thoughts



(i)
an oasis of ecstasy
in deserts of time
.
.
.
 her glance


(ii)
Memories flow
    From rivers of remembrance
   To seas of forgetfulness


(iii)
Free your words
Board an express
To free your life





Prompted by TenWord prompt at dVerse Poets Pub
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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousFriday, 16 January 2015 at 21:06:00 GMT-8

    fine words, you really hit it spot on with these three

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  2. brudbergSaturday, 17 January 2015 at 00:07:00 GMT-8

    The electrifying glance in the first ne really hit me.

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  3. Kathy ReedSaturday, 17 January 2015 at 00:40:00 GMT-8

    ...thirsty for love is what hit me...wow..

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  4. GraceSaturday, 17 January 2015 at 04:30:00 GMT-8

    Board an express, I like this ~ Thanks for participating ~

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  5. Brian MillerSaturday, 17 January 2015 at 05:21:00 GMT-8

    nice turn in that first one....

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  6. dsSaturday, 17 January 2015 at 08:02:00 GMT-8

    Love the way the form followed the idea in the first. So well written. Thank you.

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  7. VictoriaSaturday, 17 January 2015 at 09:57:00 GMT-8

    These are so good, Umesh. All three of them deliver a message and the second one, especially, resonates with me today as I go visit my 94 year old mother who lives in the world of her memories.

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  8. Rosemary Nissen-WadeSunday, 18 January 2015 at 14:06:00 GMT-8

    I love them all - such unexpected metaphors. :)

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